* I heard little about the conditions of factory farms before watching these movies.
*Because in factory farms using machines, so they could make fast.
*Yes, because I need to know more about that situations then I hope I could help them.
*I think we shold supports family or small farms.
*Because we could eat any foods from factory farms in our life.
*Yse, I will look that animals from because I don't want to have a dirty animals in my life.
you should write clear summary and reflection also.....because here isn't clear your opinion.
ReplyDeleteI don't see enough summery or reflection on your blog. Do you know about meatrix?
ReplyDeleteyou post will be too short, you don't have enough summery or reflection.
ReplyDeleteyou should write more information to talk.
ReplyDeletehey dude, you should write more and it should be clear enough. so,everyone can understand well.
ReplyDeleteYour summery is so small.
ReplyDeletethes blog post has a reflection, but it is not vary clearly stetted. you have good opinion i'm for it.
ReplyDeleteWhat you meen when rout I think we shold supports family or small farms.
you should write good introduction and big summary.i didn't understand well what u write in the summary.
ReplyDeleteIt's more like answer questions, but reflection.
ReplyDeleteYou should write more your feeling after you watched the meatrix movies.
i believe that you need to watch this movie and taking note from this movie. however, we can stop it by supporting family farm.
ReplyDeleteMaybe it's your way to wrote the reflection. However you need to write more details things in it. It's too short.
ReplyDeleteYou answered the questions but if you could put your information into paragraphs it would be good.Tell me more about what you think of this.
ReplyDeleteI do not think the author's writting is an essay, no conclusion, no introduction, no body.
ReplyDeletei agree with your point that no one knows that when they going to eat dirty factory farming products. I think that author needs to write more details and hsve strong claim.
ReplyDeleteI understand what are you trying to say but you need to be more specific and stick with your thoughts so everyone can understand it. You wrote some defferent ideas and thoughts with making so much space and stars. you should skip this and try to write a good easay.
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